Hi - love the tone and heaven and hell the excitement and the ennui of relationships came through strongly. But I started to skim after 5 as I began to feel this was going to more of the same and I wanted either a change in tone or sense that something was going to happen.
I hope this is useful in some small way. - my first reaction would be - fuck off idiot you clearly are too dumb to understand my writing. But then maybe in a couple of days I would start to think whether there might be something to consider...
I'm so embarrassed by suggesting that after a while you should find something to consider in my comment - fuck off male dickhead is fine.
What I was trying to say that while I always ask people for critical comment - my reaction when I get it is generally irritation and dismissal...but then if i allow that criticism some space in my mind I sometimes find there is something of value in it.
Historic. Cheers to one year. Your writing surely makes the world a better place 💌
so nostalgic and intimate, thank you for writing such a beautiful piece
Hi - love the tone and heaven and hell the excitement and the ennui of relationships came through strongly. But I started to skim after 5 as I began to feel this was going to more of the same and I wanted either a change in tone or sense that something was going to happen.
I hope this is useful in some small way. - my first reaction would be - fuck off idiot you clearly are too dumb to understand my writing. But then maybe in a couple of days I would start to think whether there might be something to consider...
I'm so embarrassed by suggesting that after a while you should find something to consider in my comment - fuck off male dickhead is fine.
What I was trying to say that while I always ask people for critical comment - my reaction when I get it is generally irritation and dismissal...but then if i allow that criticism some space in my mind I sometimes find there is something of value in it.